- Bird was too big
- The spirit should be more elastic
- The bird should be more shocked to survive
- More elastic spirit
- the celebration should be a dance
- The boiling was too distracting
- maybe a source of lighting so that the bird is more defined
I added a bit of line work to the background so that it looks a bit more part of the bird’s world. But since Jacob thought about editing it further in After effects, I sent him the png files and the background image separately.
I helped Jacob with some after effects and tips on how to make the camera shakes , etc,etc, better as well for the final product of this scene.